RUBRIC FOR EVALUATING ESSAYS

Style/Fluency 
4 points
•    Is engaging
•    Uses accurate, precise vocabulary that is appropriate for audience and purpose
•    Uses active and precise verbs
•    May use figurative language, imagery, and or striking language
•    Is fluent, easy to read
•    Uses an effective variety of sentence beginnings, structures, and length
•    Is readable, neat, nearly error-free
3 points
•    Is occasionally engaging
•    Uses accurate but general word choice that is appropriate for the audience and purpose
•    Uses a mix of precise and general verbs
•    Uses familiar vocabulary and phrases with some striking language
•    Is generally fluent with occasional choppiness
•    Uses some variety of sentence beginnings, structures, and length
•    Is mostly readable and neat
2 points
•    Is somewhat bland
•    Uses general word choice that may include occasional errors in word usage
•    Uses a few active verbs but most are imprecise or colorless (i.e.…is, did, go)
•    Uses familiar vocabulary and phrases
•    Uses a variety of sentence beginnings, structure, or length but has many rambling or choppy sentences
1 point
•    Is bland
•    Uses inaccurate or repetitive work choice that is occasionally inappropriate for audience and purpose
•    Uses passive, colorless, or imprecise verbs
•    Uses vague language or frequent clichés
•    Is incomplete or rambling
•    Uses simple, repetitive sentence beginning, structures, and lengths OR many sentences combined needlessly
•    Has some unreadable portions
0 points
•    The writing is illegible
 
Content/Organization
4 points
•    Meets all the requirements of the prompt
•    Stays fully focused on topic
•    Includes relevant information
•    Provides main ideas and specific, elaborated details that move beyond the obvious
•    Includes an inviting introduction, logical arrangements of ideas, and satisfying conclusion
•    Maintains a clear order with transitions between ideas
3 points
•    Meets most of the prompt’s requirements
•    Stays mostly focused
•    Includes mostly relevant information
•    Provides main ideas but details are general or brief or obvious
•    Includes a recognizable introduction, arrangement of ideas and conclusion; ideas may wander a bit; may be predictable
•    Provides some connections between ideas with few transitions
2 points
•    Meets some of the prompt’s requirements
•    Addresses a broad topic or focuses on a trivial point
•    Provides sketchy information that may be list-like
•    Begins or ends abruptly; arrangement of ideas is stilted or occasionally random
•    Rarely uses transitions
1 point
•    Meets few of the prompt’s requirements
•    Severely digresses from topic
•    Includes much irrelevant information
•    Does not provide main ideas or does not support them; details may be repetitious
•    Begins or ends abruptly with no introductions or conclusion; there is little or no attempt to establish order
•    Does not connect ideas
0 points
•    The writing is off topic

Language Usage
2    Points  Language skills successfully support meaning; few, if any, errors in the following:
•    Subject/verb and pronoun/antecedent agreement
•    Modifiers
•    Punctuation; end punctuation, commas, apostrophes, quotation marks, semicolons
•    Abbreviation and paragraphing
1 point  Language skills support meaning; several errors in some or all of the following:
•    Subject/verb and pronoun/antecedent agreement
•    Modifiers
•    Punctuation; end punctuation, commas, apostrophes, quotation marks, semicolons
•    Abbreviation and paragraphing
•    Spelling and paragraphing
0 points Language skills impede meaning; response is error-ridden


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